话题一：个人情况
年级
单元
话题
功能
七上
Unit1 My name"s Gina.
结交新朋友
介绍自己；问候他人；询问并给出电话号码
七上
Unit2 This is my sister.
家庭
介绍人物；辨认人物
七上
Unit 8 When is your birthday？
日期
谈论日期
七下
Unit 1 Can you play the guitar？
加入俱乐部
谈论能力
七下
Unit 9 What does he look like？
外貌特征
描述人物的外貌
八上
Unit 3 I"m more
outgoingthanmy sister.
个人特点
谈论个人特点；与他人作比较
九年级
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
我们是如何变化的
谈论你过去是什么样的
《英语课程标准》中关于“个人情况”的子话题有：1.个人信息；2.家庭信息；3.学校信息；4.兴趣与爱好；5.工作与职业。
分析毕节近8年(2013～2020)中考书面表达的命题形式可知，针对此话题，共考查过1次：2017年书面表达B要求以“A Person I Want to Thank”为题，介绍你最想感谢的人。
从全国来看，关于“个人情况”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查：
1．介绍自己的家庭情况(2019武汉，2019黄冈)；
2．介绍自己或他人的外貌、性格、爱好等(2020桂林，2019扬州，2019吉林，2019滨州，2019百色，2019柳州，2019泸州)；
3．介绍社会中的热点人物、著名人物或你心中的英雄(2020贵港，2020广元，2019河南)；
4．讲述一件事或经历，表达自己的看法或感受(2020临沂，2019天津，2018上海)；
5．感恩他人，如感恩父母、老师、朋友等(2020金华，2020襄阳，2020百色，2019昆明，2019天水，2019自贡)；
6．认识与评价，如每个人都有自己的独特之处(2020上海，2019呼和浩特)；说明自己的优缺点(2019南通)；
7．讲述自己是如何变化的(2019临沂)。
一、常用话题词汇
1．外貌：tall，short，strong，thin，handsome，beautiful/nice，goodlooking，fat，look like，(be) of medium height，a round face，two big eyes，have a sweet smile，short straight hair
2．性格品质、与人相处：kind(be～to sb.)，friendly(be～to sb.)，strict(be～with sb.)，shy，quiet，active，outgoing，patient(be～with sb.)，popular(be～with sb.)，easygoing(随和的)，lovely，loving(慈爱的)，humorous，brave，funny，clever/smart，calm，lazy，selfish(自私的)，mean(吝啬的)，get on/along with sb.
3．职业：teacher，worker，doctor，nurse，dentist，driver，writer，engineer，farmer，policeman/policewoman，postman，actor/actress，singer，dancer，scientist，musician，cook，pilot，coach，manager，businessman
4．兴趣爱好：hobby，like，prefer，enjoy，favorite，be fond of，be interested in
(1)体育：go fishing，go hiking，play basketball/football，running，swimming
(2)收藏：collect stamps/old coins/balls/shells(贝壳)
(3)其他：fly kites，read novels，write stories
5．能力：be able to，be good at/do well in，learn about，learn…from，try one"s best to do sth.，be talented in
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助之。
Everyone has his price.天生我材必有用。
◆人物介绍类
Jack is a 15yearold boy with great ability.
He has a strong will and never gives up.
He"s of medium height and always wears a pair of glasses.
He"s very helpful. He is always ready to help others.
My grandparents have had a great influence on me.
She always encourages us to speak English as much as possible.
【仿写】我的英语老师总是鼓励我努力学习。
__My__English__teacher__always__encourages__me__to__study__hard.
He is friendly to everyone and he often helps people out．
He is good at math and he is also talented in sports.
【仿写】露西在美术方面很有天分。
__Lucy__is__talented__in__art.__
I used to be shy，but now I"m outgoing.
I spend some of my free time playing football for my team.
【仿写】她经常花一些时间辅导我们做作业。
__She__often__spends__some__time__helping__with__our__homework.__
There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.
【仿写】毫无疑问，我的妈妈是一位伟大的妈妈。
__There__is__no__doubt__that__my__mother__is__a__great__mother.__
◆介绍想感恩的人及如何表达感恩之情类
Never fail to be thankful to the people around you.
Among them，I should give my special thanks to my mom who has done much for me.
【仿写】我想把我最特别的感谢送给我的语文老师，因为她教会了我许多。
__I__would__like__to__give__my__special__thanks__to__my__Chinese__teacher__who__has__taught__me__a__lot.__
She gave me a hand in time though she was very tired at night.
【仿写】尽管爸爸很忙，但是他总是在我有困难的时候帮助我。
__Though__my__father__is__very__busy，he__always__gives__me__a__hand__when__I__am__in__trouble.__
I was so grateful at that time that my eyes were filled with tears.
I not only got the deep love from my mom but also was moved by her deeply.
【仿写】不仅在生活中而且在学习上，我都要感谢父母。
__I__will__thank__my__parents__not__only__in__life__but__also__in__study.__
I will be responsible for my decisions in order not to make my parents worry about me.
◆兴趣爱好类
Hobbies can open up our eyes to the outside world.
Hobbies can make me grow as a person，develop my interests and improve my skills.
My life is full of happiness because of my hobby.
I"m fond of classical literature.
Li Lei is interested in/takes an interest in/has a strong interest in swimming.
【仿写】我对旅游有浓厚的兴趣。
__I__have__a__strong__interest__in__traveling.__
He is crazy about listening to English songs.
He often loses himself in reading books.
Daming gets excited about watching movies.
I"m deeply in love with climbing mountains.
【仿写】她热衷于收集各种东西，如火车票、邮票和硬币。
__She__is__crazy__about__collecting__all__kinds__of__things，such__as__train__tickets，stamps__and__coins.__
(原创热点题)每到毕业季，学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感激之情，如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求，以“I Love You，My English Teacher”为题，写一篇短文。
内容包括：1.介绍老师的外貌特征及性格特点；
2．喜欢他(她)的原因；
3．表达对老师的喜爱之情。
要求如下：1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、学校名等信息；
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I Love You，My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years.My English teacher ________________________________________________________________________
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【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。需仔细审题，理解信息，明确要点。本文适合四段式写法：第一段简要点明你喜欢的老师是谁；第二段介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况；第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因；第四段抒发你对老师的情感。文章时态主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师的相关情况时，应使用第三人称。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一，对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲，易失分的地方主要有：
1．描述人物外貌时，be与has混淆不清；
2．不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句，句式简单枯燥，缺乏趣味性。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1．He is strict with every student.He cares about every student.(改为并列句，使句意保持不变)
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2．The students from poor families have trouble.He is always ready to help them.(用“when引导的从句”和“in trouble”升格，改为复合句)
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3．With the help of him，many students like English.(用“fall in love with”和“because of him”升格，使句意更立体)
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【佳作欣赏】
I Love You，My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.
Mr.Huang is of medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair of glasses. He is very strict with us but he cares about every student.When the students from poor families are in trouble，he is always ready to help them.
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively. Many students fall in love with English because of him.
I love you，my English teacher! I will never forget you.
【名师赏析】本文的亮点之处有：1.be of medium height，be strict with，care about，be in trouble，be ready to do sth.，fall in love with等短语的灵活运用，体现了作者丰富的语言积累和扎实的基本功；2.but，because等连词的运用，使句式结构富于变化，同时表意更加清楚明白；3.整篇作文层次分明，内容完整：第一段引出写作主题；第二至三段分别对应写作要点提示的前两点；最后一段表达自己对老师的喜爱之情(写作要点提示的第三点)。
(原创热点题)在经历了2020新冠肺炎疫情、抗洪抢险等大灾难后，很多人对“英雄”有了新的认识，不再是一味地追捧流量明星，而是对那些奋战在一线的医护人员、战士、志愿者等表现出了极高的敬仰之情。请根据下列提示和要求，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇短文。
内容包括：1.说明谁是你心目中的英雄；
2．介绍他(她)的英雄事迹；
3．你的态度及未来的打算。
要求如下：1.短文须包括所有的提示，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
The Hero in My Heart
There are many heroes in our life. Among them，
Doctor__Zhong__Nanshan__is__one__of__the__heroes__I__admire__most.__
____He__fought__against__the__terrible__viruses__twice__without__thinking__about__his__own__safety.__In__2003，he__led__his__medical__workers__to__fight__against__SARS_ _successfully.17__years__later，although__he__is__already__84，he__led__his__team_ _to__Wuhan__to__fight__against__COVID19.With__his__knowledge，he__gave__lots__of_ _useful__advice__on__what__to__do__to__avoid__the__virus.His__advice__saved__thousands__of__people.He__is__a__good__doctor__in__the__eyes__of__Chinese__people.____
Zhong__Nanshan"s__spirit__is__well__worth__learning.I"ll__study__hard__and__be__a_ _useful__person__like__him__in__the__future.________
思路点拨
1．体裁：记叙文
2．人称：以第三人称为主
3．时态：以一般现在时为主(介绍第2点时用过去时)
4．段落布局：三段式写作：第一段直接引入写作主题，说明你心目中的英雄是谁(提示第1点)；第二段介绍这个英雄人物的事迹(可列举1～2个示例，提示第2点)；第三段说明你的态度或未来的打算(可从英雄身上具备的精神品质出发来表明看法，提示第3点)。
